Any comments about the title & description of my site?

Hi,

I have submitted my site to the category:
http://www.dmoz.org/Regional/North_America/United_States/Business_and_Economy/Real_Estate/Rentals/

It is still not listed yet. I am not so sure if the title and description of my site meet the requirements. can you please give me some comments about them? Hope it is not too late to ask this question Thank you so much!

Title:
RoomYou.com - USA Housing Service

Description:
Provides an Internet rental housing service to find roommates/rooms, apartments/houses/tenants, and offices/merchants in USA.

Yours is a typical sort of submission really; loaded with keywords that are not going to be used by the editor.

You have two choices. Leave "as is" and someone will review it eventually, or write a new guidelines compliant title and description and resubmit it (to the exact same category). With a resubmission, the submission date will be updated and the reviewing editor will not know that you already waited some time previously.


I did not look at your site, nor the specifics of the category that you submitted to, so I make no claim as to whether youtr site even qualifies for a listing in the directory at all.