We can't answer your specific query but here's some general advice.
To guard against ODP listing hijacks, we avoid amending a listed URL when the original is still functional. It's best to arrange for the original to redirect to the new before requesting the change. This can either be automatic or a prominent notice on the original home page.
Avoid the temptation to write a keyword stuffed or promotional title and description. These are declined on sight and there's a danger that the editor might not notice that there's also a URL change.
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