Paul Peace
Member
- Joined
- Nov 17, 2004
- Messages
- 10
Title: The Wildlife Store
Description: - selling wildlife gardening products for birds, hedgehogs, butterflies, ladybirds, bees, etc. plus interesting projects, facts and wildlife information.
http://www.thewildlifestore.co.uk/index.html
I can't see anything wrong with this! I've tried removing 'selling' and 'interesting' in case they were deemed promotional language or value judgements but to no avail and tried removing the dash. I'm not willing to remove 'Store' as that's the official name. Description is within permitted 25 words. The grammar is fine. The list of animals maybe construed as a keyword string?
Any ideas?
Description: - selling wildlife gardening products for birds, hedgehogs, butterflies, ladybirds, bees, etc. plus interesting projects, facts and wildlife information.
http://www.thewildlifestore.co.uk/index.html
I can't see anything wrong with this! I've tried removing 'selling' and 'interesting' in case they were deemed promotional language or value judgements but to no avail and tried removing the dash. I'm not willing to remove 'Store' as that's the official name. Description is within permitted 25 words. The grammar is fine. The list of animals maybe construed as a keyword string?
Any ideas?